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Will you sit up from yesterday til tomorrow just to watch the sunrise with me?
Will you still love me even when I did
and the circles around my eyes darken
My skin looks a little paler
My mind a little slower
Will you still love me if I become thinner?
If something goes wrong I my waist shrinks
Will you still love me when I'm round
So big with child
That I can no longer put my own socks and shoes on?
Will you still love me
Can you imagine if I were to gain weight
She tells me it's going to happen
Once I have a child that is
It's in my blood
Will you sit around and talk about stupid things until we both pass out
Will you be jealous if I snuggle with a woman?
Will you still love me if I flirt with women
When I miss you?
Will you wait for me?
Wait until I can be with you?
Or will you leave
Will you love me despite the idiocy I constantly write
Can you deal with how stupid I can be?
How I worked on things until the dawn arose?
The sky is a pretty pale blue-grey
Will you love me dispite my crazed worried side?
The part that makes me freak out
When I hear
The drunks come home at 6 in the morning?
Those who I love
Will you love me unconditionally?
Or will you put conditions on your love for me?
Remember the crazed writings all come from this twisted brain
Guided by a loving heart
What a lovely way to burn.
©2008-2009 ~Rojozorra
:iconrojozorra:

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Oh what a lovely way to burn, what a lovely way to burn.

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:iconsappycookie:
what a lovely way to burn indeed... i love this piece, touches me a lot. it's a doubt many of us share. :heart: i adore it :)

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To be brave is to be capable of hiding that you are afraid

*My mind*
:iconempresshockee:
I think it has a sweet side to it. And i like how it asks if you'll put conditions on love.
:iconrojozorra:
:smooch: Thank you dear. :)

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Last night I found myself on the edge of hell.

This morning I found my bed large and empty.

The sunshine means nothing when you wake

To no one beside you.

Now I find myself down the rabbit hole.

If you need me follow the White Rabbit.
:iconrojozorra:
Thank you very very much :D :hug: I really appreciate the feedback

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Last night I found myself on the edge of hell.

This morning I found my bed large and empty.

The sunshine means nothing when you wake

To no one beside you.

Now I find myself down the rabbit hole.

If you need me follow the White Rabbit.
:iconplatinummyr:
:aww: :giggle: :heart:

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconrojozorra:
Haha you are sooo weird :D

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Last night I found myself on the edge of hell.

This morning I found my bed large and empty.

The sunshine means nothing when you wake

To no one beside you.

Now I find myself down the rabbit hole.

If you need me follow the White Rabbit.
:iconplatinummyr:
Oh yes! :D :iconnewglomp:

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:iconrojozorra:
:D Good you know it

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Last night I found myself on the edge of hell.

This morning I found my bed large and empty.

The sunshine means nothing when you wake

To no one beside you.

Now I find myself down the rabbit hole.

If you need me follow the White Rabbit.

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